Agents of Dreamland (2017) by Caitlín R. Kiernan
Early July 2015, in Winslow Arizona. The Signalman, a government agent, is waiting to meet with a mysterious woman, whom he obviously loathes. But the stakes are too high to act any other way.
So first, Caitlín R. Kiernan ! At last, her name is quite present in modern weird fiction, and I was anticipating our meeting. So I was going in with positive preconceptions. And I'm closing this book with positive preconceptions. But I unfortunately didn't have the great experience I had hoped for, nothing to tarnish the idea I had of her writing, but yeah, it was somewhat of a miss. Sort of a good miss, so there is that.
It was a difficult read for a non native, and I suspect it could be one even to one. The text is demanding. Nothing is clearly explained, the reader has to keep trying to piece every small bits together to make sense of the characters and events that are unfolding. So yeah, it's not the easiest of story to read. Which is not helped by the crazy way it is narrated. When one chapter takes place in early July, another can and will be situated dozens of years before, and yeah, even after. Protagonists change depending on the chapter too, maybe obviously, but not all of them still have their full sanity. Did I say it's a demanding text ? It's not automatically a bad thing, mind you, it's weird fiction and sometimes you have to work a little to appreciate the nuances of a story. And that's without talking about the fact that some cosmic horror stories are not meant to be fully understood.
So great and intriguing characters. Creepy scenes, that don't show but suggest. What could go wrong ?
Well in my mind the story is self-sabotaging when it comes to its length. It's a short story, and believe me I love and read a ton of short stories. But in this case, when all was said and done, I can't help but feel the overall plot lacking. Like the narrative is hurrying a little too quickly toward an ending. There is an inconsequentiality to the characters' actions, or put another way, the story ideas are great, the story events are a little lacking. I know that powerlessness can be a trait of cosmic horror, too, but I feel the story beats veer a little too close to pointlessness, and that the overall text would have gained to be longer and being granted some more beats.
So at the end of the day it was a very solid cosmic horror story, I will very probably read the follow-up cases and Kiernan still has all my attention. But it was a little short.